Personality Brain Storm

I wrote a piece when i was young on the same subject, and i just thought i haven't done one in a while so i should. Just to see how it comes out this time

There's a storm within the synapses

A nightmare in my dreams

A master plan in creation

A war that's raged since birth

A distant battlefield in the fragmented memories

A great show of strength, and power

They have fought with no let up

Fighting to hold control of a monster

A guard to the fleeing maiden

Two entity's wrapped by brain stem alone

Bullets splatter through my soul 

A desperate craving for an unattainable safety

The war for sanity of opposites

Reaching out to my friend for salvation 

Protecting those dear with no regard for the destruction 

Driven to aggression by Resistance 

This isn't the way its meant to go

I can't let you tear yourself apart

A suicidal murder scene

the power to fight for control diminished

possession for her safety 

One is crazed, one is broken 

Shattered remains i put down my weapons

Glorified battle hero i stand victories

What remains ...

A scattered corpse

The host ripped and torn through its vessel

The war can rage no more

Reviews

[Nautili]

Inner conflicts can indeed feel like a war raging within, and when they are over. we realize whether we made the right choices or not for ourselves. Yet we can learn from even the bad choices, if we are wise enough to do so. Thanks for sharing.

[Pax]

a dark tale and the message loudly clear "The war can rage no more"
wonderful

[Admiral Kirk]

Wow, very powerful... Reading this was like watching Ghostbusters... I really like Ghostbusters... Unlike with some poems I read, my brain was not detached at all while I read this. Great job, this is a very powerful and wonderfully written poem.