- Poem - I dream

I always was a dreamer even from young. Written at the age of 12

I dream of a world

with no suffering or pain

were hunting is banned

beacause its insane

Where school is a figment 

of smoggy dreams

vanishing into

a summer breeze

Where rain is not cold

but full of fun

Where the ground is bouncy

and free of gum .

Reviews

[Manda]

oh i loved this. i loved the way you wrote this. it was very creative and short. well done!

[larryb]

Oh PS....dont look at my stuff it way too adult for you and i mean it lol

[larryb]

Clever little piece...I think you will be a famous author one day...keep doing what your doing :)

[Pancole's Jelly Bean]

I love this...really!