Kiss me

 I kno its not the same anymore.. i wont love again.. but just let me feel alive.. just kiss me meaninglessly cause it dosent matter to me anymore… my hearts long dead.. but let it pulse fo r amoment anothers hand in mine.. im sorry ill never love you , i proberly wont even care.. but kiss me kiss me like it matters like if i die tonight you’ll miss me.

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[Liverpoolfan]

What is this? There are so many spelling and grammer mistakes that I can't even begin to point out. By I am going to try to do so nonetheless. This is quite a poor piece of writing. This must be said. Please don't take this as an offence... it just is really poor.
You could start by reading through and correcting the mistakes in the writing yourself. For example, the first sentence, "I kno its not the same anymore.." should be "I know it's not the same anymore." Then, "i wont love again..." should be "I won't love again." And etc, hopefully you get the idea.
Also, paragraphs are need, even though this is quite a short piece of writing. From just looking at it I could tell it wasn't going to be a very good piece of writing. Paragraphs are a MUST.
This piece of writing could be soo much better. It is quite clearl that you have the ideas... you just need to get them down on paper a little better.
Also, I suggest you read some books to help you to do this. There are loads of good books out there, and reading can help improve your writing distractly. Reading for pleasure is actually really enjoyable.
Good luck with your writing. I hope you consider some of these improvements, and bare this in mind for future pieces that you write.