ill let me love you

ill let me love you

A Poem by Ama May Cooper
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Because i dont care anymore..im just gonna love you and let it kill me

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i cant stand it
because he actually came over, because he hugged me
because he told me he missed me
because he said he was sorry
because he looked into my eyes and kissed me
i love him and every moment im with hiim it dosent matter
i dont care if i have to watch him kiss her
i dont care if it kills me
i dont care if it tears me up insie
i love him and im willing to die for him
ill let him kill me... and ill die smiling
 

© 2009 Ama May Cooper


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Sacrifice for love can be overwhelming and difficult, but this is precious. Great work!

-Will

Posted 15 Years Ago


Fine job Cappi..

Shows the feeling we get when we are so in love we would do anything for it.. Imagery was perfect, I think you captured the essence perfectly.

Mag xxx

Posted 15 Years Ago


So true this piece is. I love the rawness of your work and the truth that it holds. Good job, keep it up.

Posted 15 Years Ago


That shows true passion.. good job!

Posted 15 Years Ago


Written with passion...

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on September 21, 2009

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Ama May Cooper
Ama May Cooper

London, south west, United Kingdom



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