3 words

i found this a humours little write, that i wrote after discovering that it was indeed 3 words and wud greatly confuse people

Those 3 words

you wield with vengence

once uttered i will pleed

another while to bask in glory

before you plundge me into an uncertain darkness

those 3 words you utter slyly

like some secret weapon

words that prick my ears so high

and open my eyes so deadly wide

those 3 words i cant yet say

no reply can i quite formulate

i just take my heavy feet, my heavy head

and then i trudge my way up to bed

those 3 words you always say

when the clock strikes 10pm

words one day ill fight agasint

but for now what can i do

just do as you say

GO TO BED

Author's Note

Ironically written at 6am , to which i havent actually had any sleep. So if its dreadful let me kno and ill look over it when im sleeping better again

Reviews

[lindsay]

Nice ending! Like the others I expecting I love you hah but you suprised me, I like this a lot!

[Taylor H]

I seriously adore this poem! lol I totally thought it was going to be I LOVE YOU. But it wasn't. Great poem. This is definitely one of my favs.

[Faith]

wow, great idea for a poem, i would have never thought something so simple, acan be so interesting and fun to read, i like this a lot

-Faith♥

[R Lee Cline]

I agree with LJW very original....I like it...when I was a kid I hated those words....Keep up the good work...Lee

[Kevin Mattingley]

I really thought it was going somewhere else too.

I love some of the ideas in there; uncertain darkness, ears pricking and a secret weapon! Its great!

Kevin x

[LJW]

Awesomely original!

[Jibey]

It's good ... I thought the three words were going to be connected with his rejection... but then it turned out to be a child's complaint! Neat surprise! It worked nicely.