left wanting

INspired by someone else's poem.. called wanting a beatuiful poem it was and it inspired me to write this

left forever and always wanting you
the one i love
teh one i cant quite grasp
between my fingers
one last time
forver there you remain
the one ill want
always
again and again

Reviews

[Changed to a New Accoun..]

had a good start but could b a much more powerful poem if u made it longer and went into more depth