Stream of conciousness

This is very different to my normal work, so please cheak out my other stuff even if you dislike this, or the style this is written in. My mum showed me a weird way of formulatinga poem... beware it dosent make sense baiscally you make links in your mind

A poem

story

book

page

writing

written

written in ryhme

ryhming slang

cockney ryhming slang

chav

tracksuit

baggy

clothes

clothes store

shopping store

store for harvest

harvest crops

farming

organic

fair trade

slave trade

maid

clean

cleaning fluid

water

oxegygen

air

breathe

in

inside

inside me

heart

beating

beating a child

abuse

sexual

rape

murder

murder she wrote

 

Author's Note

loool..well that was interesting to say the least

Reviews

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i like it..the way you wrote it was interesting...great write

[Akina]

I think it was really great.
great written, and it were very fun to read.
thanks for sharing.

Akina

[IPMONER]

chopped ingeniously.. love it

[Beautified]

lol It is interesting. Your linked thoughts tell a little story all by itself. Your mother knows what she is talking about. I like it, you did good!