Decayed Rose Petals

Like a withered rose 

She rots and crumbles

decomposed memories

neglected to shattered whipsers

Her fingers lay amongst the petals 

caressed by nature alone

strewn across the blankets 

untarnished by affections

no grave violence had occured

merely melted away 

shivering alone in a locked room

clutching her lively boque

Reviews

[Pax]

emotionally sad and dark tale. good job.

[FreeSoulLoveDance]

This is some good imagery. I enjoyed it :)

[Beck Louise]

This is really beautifully written :)

[WindSong]

I'm glad I stopped by to read this beautifully scribed poem of depth, imagery and skill!

[Trixolomanea]

You really seem to know how to use your pen, wow! I've read two poems of you now, and I must say I'm intrigued! You make it sound so effortless :) Very good job!

[afra]

wow ..very touchy...i feel the same way some times ...great write

[Baby Ricochet]

WOW. THat's loneliness. Beautiful

[Owlgirl]

Wow! Very emotional and very very very well written. Nice imagery, beautiful writing.

[Debbie_Philly]

This is an amazing write.... so felt. deep , sad and lonely feelings conveyed.. Well done !! :)

[Crazy Cat Man]

a terrific short poem :) I love it