A rest of multiple deaths

Written about a nightmare ive had a few times. With various different deaths involved i only put in a few but it tends to be a different selection every night.

First I am drowning gasping for air

Chocking on fading remnants of life

reaching upwards toward a distant light

dragged down to a un survivable depth 

The world shimmers around me 

consciousness and sense of life turn to black

it seems endless like a broken picture

consumed in an empty nothingness

Suddenly im sprawling cold tiles beneath me

Sodden , drenched through to the soul 

An insufferable cold charges through my shivering limbs

spluttering coughing, water drenched iron purged from the system

My hands begin to burn like the floor is acidic to the touch 

Searing agony and blinding pain surging through the nerve endings 

My insides going up in flames, deforming cells in a searing heat 

I cry and scream but my throat is silenced, engulfed

Acrid smoke flows through my system 

Leaving sticky trails down to my vital organs

Oxygen starvation kicks in and colors blur

Darkness consumes once again 

Floating in it this time 

No falling , tumbling unsure of destination

Not a landing in sight 

Streaking through a sky of un-uttered silenced realities

A hospital bed below me 

Injections from head to toe

Sharp cackles from medical staff

Weaving sharpened butcher knives

Hands slip, voices scream

Blood curdling screams predicting a doom i see before me 

A loose grip sends a knife charging toward my skull

Wedges deep , blinded by a warm stream

Time seems to freeze before me

Head exploding , shutting down 

Familiar memories flashing before my retina's

A lack of sensations throughout my limbs 

I scream out load

The words return to my lungs 

The pain suddenly gone 

Bolt upright , sweating sitting in a familiar room.

Reviews

[Pax]

a dark and miserable dream..really scary..good job...it like a brilliant horror flick..

[Nautili]

How do you rest your head upon your pillow knowing that such dreams await you? I have two reoccuring dreams- one with snakes everywhere and one with seemingly endless rooms in my house, ones I have never seen before or forgot they existed. but these dreams are a Disney Flick compared to your bone-chilling, mindbending, tortuous dreams. Well written. i hope you find more peace within your dreams in the nghts that lay ahead....

[Ama May Cooper]

Thank you very much for your review it is greatly appriciated. Ive dealt with nightmares since very young so dont tend to faze me so much anymore and there brilliant pieces of inspiration so i tend to use them as much to my advantage as possible.
Your room dream sounds really creepy, i think that woudl scare me more than a sense of direct danger even.
I shall review some of you work in a little while thank you very much for taking the time to read mine.