Dancing in the rain

Sitting in the middle of class with nothing to do but watch the rain fall .

You fall so lightly

On my skin

Wash away my sickness

Leaving me senseless 

Sun shining through

Such beautiful colors

Twirling in the streets

You make me feel complete

Reviews

[Lydia]

I really like this. Short and sweet for sure.

[I Shred This Cabbage]

this is good writing :) i sense a duality of words - love gently caressing your soul, leaving you feeling at one with life, at peace with the past. well done :)