she lives in hell

she is born of the devil

she will not know love

only pain

lonleyness

darkness

and fear

she can not be saved

not even the most beautiful and

powerful angel can take her from this fate

she will stay here

in hell

with nothing but

the dream to be free

Reviews

[James Johnson]

the devil is her father...she hates him, but respects him. this really does make you think! XD nice poem

[Naomi Montana Walsh]

is hell really hell if someone feels at home there..? or would really hell for a person of darkness be to be in happy happy ponyland..anyhow it makes you think ..

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

i love this, excellent. reminds me of myself

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

this is amazing... i love it

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem. Strong statement and powerful words made poem a pleasure to read. No wasted words and to the point poetry writing. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Katie L]

i love this one

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is a frightening poem with powerful imagery.
Hopefully she will grow into a woman that finds the
strength free herself. Sometimes a parent can deny
a child to choose a life of their own. There is wisdom
in your work.