it has started

she yells

we look away

i try to stay away

she gets mader

we just sit

she doesn't understand me

what i went though

what im going though

she doesn't care

i just sit there

thinking of things i would like to say

things are getting harder

they think im going to end up like her

so she wants to leave as soon as she can

she will take me with her

but little does she know

it already started

Reviews

[I Shred This Cabbage]

very dramatic yet clean. well done.

[man Atek]

hm ... very nice poem, has a strong character!

[cheeeeese]

I like the whole dramatic irony going on here, where we are in on what 'he' (i'm guessing) knows, but she doesn't. That was very unique in this piece. With an exception of some grammar errors, I believe that this is a fantastic piece.