spirit

spirit

A Poem by capn_bribri

look at the gray sky
everyone with flowers
listen to the speech he gives
you will never see her again
cry not to cry
she just wants to see you smile
she watches you from the earth
keep doing what you love
she wants to see you happy
her spirit calls to you
"be happy my daughter" she says
crying you whisper "i will try"

death is never easy for the one's who don't die

  

© 2010 capn_bribri


Author's Note

capn_bribri
hope you like it
i lost someone very dear to me this was very hard for me to write but i keep on being happy
just for her

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The emotions you're experiencing are very vividly portrayed in this poem, and I commend you for having the strength to write such a personal piece. The conflict between the loss and the knowledge that the departed would want you to remain happy is abundantly clear, and easily tied to a reader's own life. Keep up the excellent work.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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babe wat happened!

Posted 14 Years Ago


The emotions you're experiencing are very vividly portrayed in this poem, and I commend you for having the strength to write such a personal piece. The conflict between the loss and the knowledge that the departed would want you to remain happy is abundantly clear, and easily tied to a reader's own life. Keep up the excellent work.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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capn_bribri
capn_bribri

kent, WA



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Im 17 and when im not shy im really hyper . I have 7 peircings my snake bites , tongue , both sides of my nose and gauges (: I live in washington and no not washington DC just plain old washington whe.. more..

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