What you did to me

 she walks down the halls with her head 

down

she the new girl, the one kids get dared to say hi to 

as she's in the bathroom crying she hears 

people come in 

"have you seen that new girl?"

"yeah she so ugly"

"and did you see her outfit? can you 

say emo!"

she gets up and opens the stall door

she runs 

out the bathroom all the way home

she goes to her room and cries herself to 

sleep

 when her dad gets home he wakes her up

"how was your day?"

she hides her pain

"great I made a lot of friends!"

she smiles to make him believe 

he leaves and she finds her razor

never to deep 

it take's away the pain 

but this time she hits a vain 

as she bleeds to death

she whispers 

"this is what you did to me"

Reviews

[Melati]

Such a very sad poem and very deep. Keep writing :).

[Dream Catcher]

I love this. Its very deep and moving, Ive seen this situation a lot. Ive seen a friend take their own life. This is very touching to me...

[Jess.]

Wow, very deep.
It's sad that stuff like this happens everyday, it's sad that people can be so cold and not care how they're
words hurt people.
And it's also sad that people actually do that to themselves, but I understand why.
Good write.