Sunrises and Sunsets are My Joy

Ehehe... poem for a contest... figure out my message!!! *hint look at the title

Soon, it will grow dark, and shall remain

Until the sun rises again

Now , the sun is sinking into the horizon

Resting on that delicate border of time

If I had to choose my two favourite times

Sunrises and Sunsets, it would be

Ever continuing day, by day

Savour the moment, when it happens

As if it were your favourite food

Never-ending, this goes on

Death of the sun, will be its only stop

Stay and watch it rise

Until the moment ends

No one can deny the beauty

So long as you bear this close

Ever will it's magic hold

The wonders of this time

Sun rises, Sun sets

Although clouds may block your view

Remember, still the sun rises and sets

Endearing the endless hold of time

May this memory always stay

Your troubles will not diminsh the magic

Just hold on to this

Over the horizon, far from us

Your sun will never stay, forever

Author's Note

Well, if it doesn't make sense some times, it's because I'm a horrible poet. Review and tell me what the hidden message is.

Reviews

[Sabrina]

i'ts clever, but you used the same words over and over again.

[C. Porter]

Oooh, I love this!I really like how the actual message is deeper than what you would think...the simple, 'I lvoe sunsets and rises' is only present in the beginning, before the poem basis shifts. It's a sort of tipping-of-the-hat to the never-ending cycle of time, but also with the message at the end, pointing out that the sun won't last forever. Great poem!

[Jessica]

I am a horrible poet too.And I DON'T know what the hidden message is..................

[Anonymous Shadow]

this is a straight acrostic, not an abcedarian. sorry but it will be removed from the contest.

[brandon[:]

its really nice (: