Full Time is Called

Full Time is Called

A Poem by Jack Dawkins
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This poem was first conceived when the last man who played football during the Christmas Truce(1914) passed away in 2005. they are waiting in heaven for him to start the game again.

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Full time is called at last
The final player is no more.
All the ghosts of no man's land 
Will celebrate the final score.
The last man leaves his mortal 
Shell to walk on heavens shore,
Where old friends and former foe 
Wait to play the game once more.

The field is ruled with poppies red,
The ball as golden as the sun.
Death's ditch is lined with eidleweiss
And Angels sing, The New Jerusalem,
To celebrate that glorius day
When they layed down bayonet and gun,
And ran upon a no man's land
To play once more for fun.


© 2013 Jack Dawkins


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The drive to fight is tiring on man`s soul, isn`t it? We all need a rest from time to time - then is when the finer side of human nature rears it`s head. Unfortunately, not often enough. Well done. P.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Excellent. I know little about football or this particular story, but the poem breathes...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack Dawkins

11 Years Ago

Thank you.
Oh my heart this one touches deeply !! I know this story and it screams with so many voices of true peace and those above them saying kill... I have been trying to figure out a way of capturing this...but I don't need to now... You did that moment great justice, I love the visions that you set before our eyes..of hope..thank you for sharing this !

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack Dawkins

11 Years Ago

Thank you Renee that is a touching review on it's own. I'm a newbie and still feeling my way around .. read more
Renée

11 Years Ago

Oh it was my pleasure & Welcome ! that story captured my heart the first time I learned of it ! .. e.. read more
Both lyrically and in message, this is quite a gem. As much as mankind seems doomed to destroy himself, there are occassional glimpses of hope.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jack Dawkins

11 Years Ago

Thank you for the comment. I wrote this so long ago I almost forgot about it, until I was doing some.. read more
Samuel Dickens

11 Years Ago

You're very welcome. Sometimes folks dig deep into my vault and surprise me with a read. It's good t.. read more

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