Waking

I know I should let go...

3am.
Packing bags,
out the front door.
Heading out with my heart
in my pocket.
"What's going on?"
Got him screaming through his teeth.
"Don't leave me here."
My life is passing me by
and I'm filled with doubt.
"Each step you take
is one away from me."

5am.
Out the door and
I finally stopped my breathing.
Bad that the
blood keeps on bleeding.
"I'm in this mess."
Look at this,
look at what you did to me.
"Am I breathing?"
Got me crying for your love,
"I can't go back."

6pm.
Slowing up,
soon to fall down.
Completely wrong from the start.
This is for the best now.
"Am I dreaming?"
Got me tripping on my feet.
"Why me?"
I don't know what to do
or say
to you.
You're not near me.
"I am still alive,
though without
you, I crave to lie
down and rest for a while.
Die the rest
of what I
already have."
Never wake up.
"What's going on?"

Author's Note

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Reviews

[nevershoutnever.]

@Iwilleatyourparents- Thanks :P
@Blessed_Angel- Thank you!
@Kim- Know I feel a powerful thank you ;)

[deeps]

Gripping powerful read. I enjoyed this.

[Blessed_Angel]

wow this write has great emotion in it. It was like i was their as the person feeling every emotion nice job..

[ShadowOfTheDay]

Really good :P