Regretting

^&*% you, Ryan Clydesdale

meanwhile,

im still thought of

as the stranger one,

the one who got all tangled

and messed with Clydesdale's

head.

as long as he has power,

i'd much rather be dead.

my life is so not worth this,

all the pain and humiliation.

how am i expected

to live with this regret?

my mind is wrapped around it,

my tongue is tightly bit.

thought

it's not like

the thought of ending myself

brings me happiness.

satisfaction is the last thing

that you'll get.

hope your life sucks a*s,

and it's full of s**t.

the last thing that you deserve is 

a life of happiness.

they don't see him clearly,

blinded by his charm,

not like me, not nearly.

he needs a damn alarm.

i run away as fast as

i will dare to go.

kiss my a*s

'cause Clydesdale,

you're so fugging slow.

Author's Note

I must say, the last line was sooo much better with the original. My apologies for the "other" words. Comments?

Reviews

[Dreamer]

Strong strong words! Lets me point out these lines "...Its not like the thought of ending myself brings me happiness. satisfaction is the last thing that you'll get" This is nothing short of the truth. There is no satisfaction, possible relief or a false sense of freedom from everything. Very good to point that out. Now, I like this as well but i was in between being mad nodding my head in agreement and laughing "...hope your life sucks a*s, and its full of s**t." But i do understand that this is serious. Lets kill them with Love as they try to stiffle us with Hate:)

[Becky C Strukamp]

Nice writing. You express your emotions quite well.

[SpeakxNow]

he does suck.

[Raven Starhawk]

Great flow with your beautiful words. Good work!!!

[nevermindfan1991]

Wow, you made something that could have easily been a rant into some poignant, profound, and beautiful. Amazing poem, great job!

[Carrion.]

very deep message.
love it:D

[Tasha]

I liked the message, you did a good job.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Hello, Goodbye]

good write.. its flow is interesting and the while the message is ambiguous.. it was non the less captivating.. good narrative..