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A Poem by Canne Mills

a, i am a mess right now -
correcting the correct
incorrect.

a, i am a mess right now -
i am a mess -
forcing forward
driving drunk.

myself -
in incorrect mind.

a mess -
doing no good
having no use - now.
and so

to sleep

away -

tomorrow.
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2009

© 2016 Canne Mills


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i am lost by reading this..lol its a very messy write but considering thats what you were going for well done!

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. wow ... brilliance with brevity ... and thought progression ... a brilliant write ...

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Added on November 12, 2010
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Canne Mills
Canne Mills

Hong Kong Island, Hong Kong



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A Poem by Canne Mills


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A Poem by Canne Mills



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