Lol. The poem is still wonderful regardless of it being an abstract piece. The following statement I can come to an understanding with, "Strewn across the seas lingering taste of salt in wounds; with bodies forever broken". In my opinion, it probably meant how the severe injury of people who had a bad fate of dying in the sea. Correct me if I wrong if the people actually die in the waters. Nice work, though.
This is lovely, really. very nice word choise. And I quite enjoy your style of writing. Often times, a poet can have all things going for them, great word choice, diction, flow, tone, but when it comes down to it what drwws me in his someones style of writing. It opens you up to how their mind works in a sort of way, ad thts the most fascinating thing of all. Judging by this piece, you have something that sets you apart from everyone, and to me, thats what every writer needs to find. Well done.
I took the breath....hey, but that wasn't of death breath..lol,
that's a nice piece, well writtn , well expresssed, words in lines are perfectly captured,
good writin'