Gray Jersey Sheets.

I’ve got you
skin to skin with ethereal connection of senses.
Its been years
since I’ve touched you like this.
Hands no longer clasped around January’s dark nights,
but drenched palms in decadent passion for brighter fires.
Your tongue
in my mouth tastes of sweet new worlds.
I’ve got you, 
wrapped up in my gray jersey sheets
Our bodies, 
maps laid upon
my living room floor.

Reviews

[MAC]

oh wow! this is everything that I love about poetry. passionate, original and incredible imagery!

[The Nude Writer]

Lovely poem.. I love jersey sheets, but this poem is better :)

[Relic's Bare Trees]

Really nice way to tell a poem and get the male readers aroused. LOL Nice writing.

Pendragon

[Steven]

From your tongue down was perfect.

[.]

Beautiful sensory, details. Way to paint a picture in your audiences head, my little artist lol jk. Great job.

-Cord

[bob, small b. aka invs]

wonderfully descriptive, visual writing. some great phrases in this. very skillful imagery.

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. Description raw and direct.
"Your tongue
in my mouth tastes of sweet new worlds."
Good visions create by strong statements. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poem.
Coyote