Loss.

Loss.

A Poem by Candylove.

april is loss

april is the last time i saw you

in an eerily empty airport,

or maybe i just don’t recall any one else

but you and me

kissing you,

for the goodbye blues

i ran straight to the restroom after checking in

texted you telling you how i felt pathetic for being such a cliche

and you said the note i slipped you 

made you well up in the car

also 

you slipped me a birthday present unbeknownst to me

that goddamn t shirt

I want it to melt into my skin 

so you can never leave me

so i can never leave you

again

april is gone

but hopefully not forever


© 2012 Candylove.


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"that goddamn t shirt
I want it to melt into my skin
so you can never leave me
so i can never leave you
again"
This was my favorite part, made me laugh. Nice work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


i feel that you are longing for this person who you truly cared about . you wrote such a meaningful and sweet piece. very nice :)


Posted 11 Years Ago


I liked this but I felt some regret in it, am I wrong?

Posted 11 Years Ago


the longing comes through very well good work

Posted 11 Years Ago


I too have been in an airport saying goodbye when I really wanted to tell her to never leave me. That day is in my mind now. She was off to Guam and I stayed behind afraid to tell her what I felt.

Thank you for your revelatory poem. It is very fine.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Nice write

Posted 11 Years Ago


very sad write, sometimes the best things written comes from the raw.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Candylove.
Candylove.

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