Warmth.

Warmth.

A Poem by Candylove.

We’d beg to differ
On innocence and evil
A common thread laced between corseted souls
We are
One
In that 
Way 
Between lightness and dark
I have faith in you, in
Your warmth.
Summer air tastes different with you around.

© 2012 Candylove.


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like your thought and choice.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I sense this is a very personal expression to a special person. And in that frame I like the like "Summer air tastes different with you around."

Posted 11 Years Ago


please can you explain what style of poetry you have implored above.


Posted 11 Years Ago


great write, yeah, it's a lovely "warmth"..lol, every line's good, powerful and words're appropriate too here. It's really an amazin' one, i was wishiin' to read it more, but i think it's enough to me afterall short one's save my time...lol
nice flow of ink, well written.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I especially liked the third line and the last line...Enjoyed Candy

SyberRose

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is beautiful, uplifting and sweet.

Posted 12 Years Ago


awesome write great work

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like the idea of unity here and the passion that the final line displays. I like the contrast between light and dark as well. Also, I though the way you used the word corseted was really interesting; it was probably my favorite thing about this poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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