We’d beg to differ On innocence and evil A common thread laced between corseted souls We are One In that Way Between lightness and dark I have faith in you, in Your warmth. Summer air tastes different with you around.
great write, yeah, it's a lovely "warmth"..lol, every line's good, powerful and words're appropriate too here. It's really an amazin' one, i was wishiin' to read it more, but i think it's enough to me afterall short one's save my time...lol
nice flow of ink, well written.
I like the idea of unity here and the passion that the final line displays. I like the contrast between light and dark as well. Also, I though the way you used the word corseted was really interesting; it was probably my favorite thing about this poem.