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A Poem by Candylove.

For every scar
Proves a battle fought

Every drop of rain
Melts the air

darkness; 
spoken like pure silk breath

Embrace the way your feet walk this earth

It’s a true blue movement.

© 2011 Candylove.


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this is so sweet
i loved it

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is just lovely. Real emotional sway in a few lines. Amazing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow, I love it. "Every drop of rain Melts the air." Such great imagery. I think it's even unfair the quote that one line because I loved the rest so much. "Spoken like pure silk breath." It's so simple yet so abstract, these words just clash together perfectly. Great, great, FANTASTIC, piece. One of the best I've read on this site.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like this, nice and easy reading. Thank you.
Regards.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Candylove.
Candylove.

the 661, CA



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A Poem by Candylove.