the tide.

If I could,

I would bottle your words,

in the salt of the ocean's blues.

Delicately pressing,

the tide, over your body.

In liquid sequence; 

we dance upon the moon.

Reviews

[Seshat Nidaba]

Very lyrical and sweet. And yes, you may! lol!

[Moonflower]

This was magical and exquisite. I love it. Magnificent writing, dear.

[V.B.]

One of the things I am finding about this site is that, every time I think I have the perfect word to describe someone's poem, some other poet beat me to it. Was gonna go with "surreal," but with a tip of the hat to Robin, I'll settle on "tranquil."

The poem hits me like a cool breeze, but then goes down like a sweet wine, and warms from the inside out. A very pleasurable experience, to say the least. Well done!

[Robin]

surreal and sensual ~ elegant poetic waves ~

[Charles]

I'll be dreaming of the Sea of Tranquility...

Very sweet, Candy.

[writer with a mind]

good but I feel like I wan't read more but otherwise good describing words well done