Broken Promises

Haiku 5/7/5 Syllables

on a clear blue sky

two doves fly, sadly unpaired

broken hearted love

Reviews

[Horizons]

Life's what, what happens in life you've well expressed into few words. I got the point you want to say, t's a situation of pain when tow beings stay apart from each others due to some life's uncertainity's... I felt the piece and you wrote the piece from the heart.

[StoryTellerWriter]

then the clouds become dark gray
and the two doves collide
one falls, the other goes on her way
only to find the fallen one, still flying by her way

[Sami Khalil]

Thank you for sharing...:)

[Traci]

a bittersweet write, much is portrayed in those three lines. well done, Shirley.

[Shirley Wontas]

Thank you for dropping by and reviewing my work, Traci..really appreciate it.. ^__^

[zainul]

Great write.
Keen observation.

[Shirley Wontas]

Glad you like it, Z :)

[zainul]

You write so well,talented writer.