Deadly Shoe

a "Happily Never After" story ~ Limerick Form

There was a charming prince searching for a bride
He wants Cinderella to be his future wife
She rushed home before midnight and the prince goes for a tag
But he stumbled on her shoe and the stairs broke his head
And poor Cinderella must clean the chimney for life

 

Reviews

[Sarah Conder]

This is clever twist on a well known story, rather satirical I think :)

[Shirley Wontas]

I'm glad you like my twist and gave me a shout here, Sarah.. really appreciate it.. :))