Loves Chance

Loves Chance

A Poem by Ashli The Amazing
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do you believe in true love?

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When Someone says I Love You
How do you know it's true?
Do you listen to what they say
And just say okay?

Do  you think true love is real?
Everyone says it's something you feel
Deep in your heart
And will never stop spreading once it starts

I don't know what to believe anymore
Because I've never felt this way before
I'm scared of getting hurt
I have this feeling that things won't work

I'm afraid to let my guard down
But every time I think of  you my heart begins to pound
Should I go with what my heart says?
Or should I go with my instincts instead?

It's so hard to choose
But hey,  what have I got to lose?
I think it's time for me to take a chance
So baby. . . Let's dance!



© 2011 Ashli The Amazing


Author's Note

Ashli The Amazing
Thanks Roze Collions for the title! [:

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ashli you did it again, another great poem. good job!(:

Posted 13 Years Ago


you could call it "some say i love you"

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great job, i think you're right people do. I suck a titles so no help from me today... Keep writing!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


This. Is. Amazing. It really reminds me of my boyfriend and I, it hits hard, because this is the exact way I feel. But I love this.

Posted 13 Years Ago


cute ending... this is really filled with feelings of true emotions when it comes to things like love, you really captured that well :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


I loved this poem, Ahmazing job i enjoyed reading it

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like the energy of this poem. You gave us all a lesson about life along the way as well. There are so many people who live with regret for not taking that first step. I've always found it amazing that women don't seem to be paralyzed with fear as guys do. Great work!

Posted 13 Years Ago


You inspired me to write, it's called : Reviews and Revelations. Let me know what you think :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


Doors are opened all the time, it we who have to chose to cross the thin red line. Love is worth walking the line, though it be many a mile.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Ashli The Amazing
Ashli The Amazing

riverbank, CA



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Names Ashli. I'm 16. A junior in high school. I'm Straight. I love music. I love singing I have a YouTube account (search Ashli Cisneros) I love rainbows, UNICORNS, and writing poetry in my free time... more..

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