Tears of Sorrow

Everyone has a secret or did something they regret in life.

I look out my window
And stare at the beautiful blue sky
This day was filled with sorrow
And i couldn't understand why

I wish i could go back in time
And fix everything
All of it happened so quickly
And the fault was all mine

So now I'm sitting here
with so many things going through my mind
All i can do is shed a river of tears
Because these secrets of mine will never unwind

Author's Note

Thank you for helping with the title [: any comments?

Reviews

[Florence]

This poem really catches my heart. I feel like it speaks my name, since I've gone through that "day filled with sorrow", and I also "wish I could go back in time and fix everything". I love the way this poem flows, it's very descriptive too. Outstanding work. :)

[Eile MacIntyre]

I think a simple name would be best.

This poem is fantastic as well.

[Roze Collions]

rivers sarrows maybe i like it

[WynterPhoenix]

This is a great poem. As for the title, how about Tears of Sorrow or Secret Tears.

[Samantha Heaton]

I love this poem! i really love it! im sorry but i cant help you with the title i just dont know lmao

[DontBlink158]

Wow i loved it. I feel like this all the time. Ummm i suck with titles but maybe... Tearful Secrets??

[Rene Velez]

Secrets of mine...that's what i would call it, most of the time your title is in your work you just have to look good, lol, nice poem by the way

[Julie Beth]

i love the last line i think its amazing now i'm not good with naming poems sooo maybe a title that has to do with secrets and regret thats all i got sorry bout that great job though :)

[brenda]

i love this i can totally realte t this now this i how i feel right now a tittle a secret unkempt?i have two untittled as poems so i dont really may have a good tittle

[frozensakura]

sorry wish i could help with a title... but great poem. i love it(: