Tears of Sorrow

Everyone has a secret or did something they regret in life.

I look out my window
And stare at the beautiful blue sky
This day was filled with sorrow
And i couldn't understand why

I wish i could go back in time
And fix everything
All of it happened so quickly
And the fault was all mine

So now I'm sitting here
with so many things going through my mind
All i can do is shed a river of tears
Because these secrets of mine will never unwind

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Florence]

This poem really catches my heart. I feel like it speaks my name, since I've gone through that "day filled with sorrow", and I also "wish I could go back in time and fix everything". I love the way this poem flows, it's very descriptive too. Outstanding work. :)

[Yina]

I think that title is perfect for the poem:) An I absolutely know the feeling! I've been there to an it's hard but you must forgive yourself

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

A beautiful piece with excellent rhyming, try reading it back aloud to yourself with the and's removed such as this I look out my window
Staring at the beautiful blue sky......definitely an excellent piece.

[lovely-livia]

love the use of words!!

[Jo]

leaves you wanting more....!

[DelicateSymphony]

This piece certainly speaks straight to my heart because I've been in dozens of situations exactly described within your piece. It stirred my emotions to what I used to feel like in the past. Very creative with the colored words. (it kinda confused me at first lol)

[Pradnya]

Hey Ashli, you are just amazing, and your poetry is really good no, actually its awesome !!!. i think the title is well suited to your poem. keep writing and sharing too :)

[light and ashes]

I love that you made certain words the colors that we associate with certain emotions. Very nice poem, not sure if its more about guilt or secrets maybe equally about both. Either way its nice and I enjoyed reading it :]

[joshua deathdealer]

Tears of Blood. I really like it. Good work.

[Daytonight]

Beautiful poignant poem. Well done. Keep on penning.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

really like this line:
"All i can do is shed a river of tears"
this was nice i enjoyed it and the colors of the type font are nice