Goodbye Kiss

I hate goodbye Kisses ]:

When a goodbye kiss
Feels like this
It's so hard to let you go
Do i want you to leave? No
I told you I would love you all my life
And you said someday I'll make you my wife
But I'm starting to think it was all a lie
You hurt me and all i can do is cry
Why doesn't love last?
Whatever i don't care anymore it's in the past
Life will get better
i refuse to stay sad forever.

Author's Note

any comments?

Reviews

[Julie Beth]

its really sad but it was amazing i love the message its protraying you did an outstanding job on it i loved it :)

[Dr.Who.LOVER]

SO GOOOD

[JennaMarie]

Very strong emotions! This poem could work for many situations and be somewhat universal for those that have lost loves. Great job!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Love the ryhmes and the nature of the poem
Excellent:)

[November Gold]

Bravo. Forward movement. This was a wonderful expression of sadness laced with strong will

[brenda]

hopeful poem i liked it !!!:)

[frozensakura]

ashli this is really good... i really hope you fine someone special(: