Goodbye Kiss

I hate goodbye Kisses ]:

When a goodbye kiss
Feels like this
It's so hard to let you go
Do i want you to leave? No
I told you I would love you all my life
And you said someday I'll make you my wife
But I'm starting to think it was all a lie
You hurt me and all i can do is cry
Why doesn't love last?
Whatever i don't care anymore it's in the past
Life will get better
i refuse to stay sad forever.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Daisy Morgy]

Really good poem i can tell that what your saying is true and totally right to what your trying to get across. a really nice emotional piece :)

[ImagineItAll]

I think a lot of us can relate to this. You packed a lot of emotion into so few words.

[Daytonight]

I can so relate to this. I am glad you have decided not to stay sad. Well written. Great rhyme and flow. Keep on penning.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

aww this is sad but true, and such emotion and feelings in it, i felt it :) really nice write

[Roze Collions]

sad but i loved it

[torments_scribe]

Even through the heartache and sadness I was glad to see it end with strength. Emotional and inspiring. Nice job :)

[Alicia Hirshey]

The emotion in this flowed perfectly. Love causes more hurt usually than it will make better, it is all a matter of finding the person that is worth the pain.

[DontBlink158]

the emotion flowed, so nice work. I liked it.

[Rene Velez]

love can be hurtful, very nice poem, short and direct with emotion

I feel like so many people can relate to this, myself included. It flows very nicely, I love the rhythm of it and how simple and yet eye catching it is. Great work! Keep it up.