Goodbye Kiss

I hate goodbye Kisses ]:

When a goodbye kiss
Feels like this
It's so hard to let you go
Do i want you to leave? No
I told you I would love you all my life
And you said someday I'll make you my wife
But I'm starting to think it was all a lie
You hurt me and all i can do is cry
Why doesn't love last?
Whatever i don't care anymore it's in the past
Life will get better
i refuse to stay sad forever.

Author's Note

any comments?

Reviews

[STAR CHILD]

This is sad but hopeful
yes there is a love that is forever

[Maya Storm]

the flow was wonderful
very easy to read
you got me from beginning to end with ease
and I liked it that you won't stay sad
an uplifting ending.

[Yina]

That was beautiful!!
Do I want you to leave? No
I can feel the sadness in this poem. You did really good

[Jo]

excellent rhyming--it flowed so naturally.

[Time.]

Your rhyming is quite amazing - this coming from another rhymer.

Amazing piece.

- James

[Blue Moon Ice Cream]

Lots of heart-breaking emotion and good job of rhyming....

[xxxxSweetDreamsxxxx]

It's great! very relatable. You'll find someone better :)

[Jessica W]

This is very good, tell's a story which is clearly meaningful to you. Which is a good base for a great poet! :)

[joshua deathdealer]

Nice and I like the ending.

[Samantha Heaton]

This is and amazing poem! i love it.. tells a story good job