Goodbye Kiss

I hate goodbye Kisses ]:

When a goodbye kiss
Feels like this
It's so hard to let you go
Do i want you to leave? No
I told you I would love you all my life
And you said someday I'll make you my wife
But I'm starting to think it was all a lie
You hurt me and all i can do is cry
Why doesn't love last?
Whatever i don't care anymore it's in the past
Life will get better
i refuse to stay sad forever.

Author's Note

any comments?

Reviews

[Nr. Nine]

Nice write ;) I like your way of writing ;) Good work, keep it going on ;)

[Jeremy Baker]

A familiar sentiment - I hated being a teenager! Well penned and thoughfully expressed.

[Sukriti Suki]

Goodbye kisses are the hardest for deep down we can sense it's a final goodbye.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

wow....sometimes I think you girls...write a tit for tat to my poetry...
Wonderful reply...lol!

[Kat]

Its really good goodbyes are always hard and love sometimes last forever sometimes not all the time

[Omar Fendri]

This is intimate, personal, authentic and peculiar. Simple but tells too much about your very inner personality.

[Ryzo]

Aw loved how you started off sad then flipped it around. Well written and targets those little thoughts and emotions you convey. :)

[kasanova]

dopeness

[Sourav]

Liked the positive vibe in the poem. It's better to move on as life doesn't stop for anything. Nice write.

[theopenbook]

i wish everyone could move on like you said:) but it's very hard:)