My Moment

A moment i will always treasure forever and ever.

All my life i believed i was ugly

Until that day

You said i was pretty and i contain inside true beauty

Now you got my heartbeat drummin' away

That's one day i'll never regret

Even when i'm dead and gone

I could never forget

That day you made me feel like i was someone.

Author's Note

My moment for life.

Reviews

[frozensakura]

as always, great poem(:

[lovely-livia]

awwwww! :) llllllllllllllllllluuuuurrrrrvvvvvveeee iiiiiitttt!!!!

[xxxxSweetDreamsxxxx]

This is so sweet. You're amazing at writing poems. All I can say is I'm still waiting for my moment. :)

[Tasha]

I know how you feel, sometimes its hard to look past appearances because of other people. We have to take that back. A very heart warming poem, that was so beautiful. Outstanding.

[light and ashes]

It is so important to look past outer appearances, because the most beautiful thing about beautiful people are the treasures that lie within. Very nice poem, heart warming and beautiful.

[David Rogers]

A very heartfelt poem...

[CharlesMonroe]

I can really relate to this (: I know how you feel, and this reminds me so much of my moment. I love this