Mother Natures Love

Love in nature

I can hear the slow breeze

In the tall redwood trees

I can see the sweet dew

As the sun comes shining through

I can smell the fresh pine

As the birds begin to chime

I can feel the wet soil beneath my feet

As i stand in the suns rays of heat

I can taste your lips on mine

This is how i know everything will be fine

Author's Note

i really hope that everything will be fine.

Reviews

[Tamara Jaber]

Beautiful poem, full of emotions and dreams, loved it...

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. Combining nature and life allow the reader to understand the emotion in your words. I like the description and the positive ending. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Jinx]

I really enjoy nature-inspired poetry-- well done !

[Blue Moon Ice Cream]

Beautiful! This reminds me of visiting Muir Woods when I was younger. You paint an excellent picture that just flows from one line to the next. It's easy to feel the peace and happiness. Neat how you incorporated each of the five senses, too.