Thinking...

i dont know

As i lay here in my bed

I think of things i've left unsaid

All my dreams and all my wishes

All my hugs and all my kisses

Are nothing more but crushed and dead

Author's Note

why did i write this? who knows.

Reviews

Whoa, I had to re-read this one a few times. It's short, but I think that's what makes it so powerful. It just sort of hits you. It's great, I love it!

[brenda]

lol you keep on writing poems that i wish to write myself cause i know how this feels a lot !! thank you
for you nice poem i just read !:)

[Julie Beth]

i liked it it was really short but great :)

[Maya Storm]

Really interesting though Ashli... maybe you wrote it about a conversation you wanted to have with someone but just didn't get around to it. Think it though??

[frozensakura]

aww... i like it keep writing i will keep reading

[Haley]

i thought it was very intresting