Thinking...

i dont know

As i lay here in my bed

I think of things i've left unsaid

All my dreams and all my wishes

All my hugs and all my kisses

Are nothing more but crushed and dead

Author's Note

why did i write this? who knows.

Reviews

[Roze Collions]

i like it

[Lily Mae]

An intense write..x Deep down inside we sometimes wish we didn't leave things left unsaid..xx

[Alicia Hirshey]

Sometimes in life we leave things unsaid, and we do things differently than we attended too. That is what makes us human. We have feelings that are easily crushed and we go on forever feeling like we aren't good enough, when really inside it has nothing to do with who you are or what you have done but with what fate has in store for you. This was an extremely deep poem. One of my favorites.

[WynterPhoenix]

I'm sure you know deep inside why you wrote it. This is a great poem with a lot of depth.

[Florence]

I like this poem, it sounds as if it came straight from the heart. Great work. :)

[compositionc]

Poems are written when your brain is too full of thoughts.
I liked the poem. Very thoughtful.

[Samantha Heaton]

I love reading things that know one knows why they wrote them(: hope that makes since?? hmmm? lol... So anyways!! Gooddddddd Job!

[DontBlink158]

Poems come when emotions flow. So you felt like thinking about what was left unsaid. I again loved it.

[Kayla K]

You wrote it because it's what needed to be written, and it's amazing.

[Rene Velez]

it's short and I like that because a persons thoughts become more contained and more vivid, nice job