Thinking...

i dont know

As i lay here in my bed

I think of things i've left unsaid

All my dreams and all my wishes

All my hugs and all my kisses

Are nothing more but crushed and dead

Author's Note

why did i write this? who knows.

Reviews

[Tasha]

I loved this!

[David Rogers]

powerful in its brevity...

[lovely-livia]

i love short poems like this it is beautiful!! lol

[xxxxSweetDreamsxxxx]

I loved it :)

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Heart wrenching work. It echoes through my mind...
and begs to be put into song.

[ImagineItAll]

That was depressing and very well written.

[Daytonight]

Well written. So very poignant with the lost dreams. Great rhyme and flow. Keep on penning.

[Libby]

This is beautiful and crushing. Seems almost lyrical.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

this is really nice i like it a lot, it's cute too and true

[joshua deathdealer]

I really like this a lot. So short but yet deadly.