Thinking...

i dont know

As i lay here in my bed

I think of things i've left unsaid

All my dreams and all my wishes

All my hugs and all my kisses

Are nothing more but crushed and dead

Author's Note

why did i write this? who knows.

Reviews

[Kat]

no offense but its kinda random so i take it as funny please don't take it offensive good job :D lol

[kasanova]

random ending though o___o i like it

[StarSandwich]

:) Not bad at all, great flow and great words makes sense and that is something i do lay in bed and come up with random poem verses >:D

[Yina]

I really like the way you rhymed this. It worked out so perfectly! I always have trouble with that:/

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

sounds like you had a song you were creating in your head :)

[Corey Crabcraft]

i prefer short poems, this is beautiful :)

[light and ashes]

A nice collection of thoughts. Well thought out and well written.

[Jeremy Baker]

I think we all feel this wqay to one degree or another. Great write!