Coral caves of my mind

Coral cave
Dressed up in pink
What a pleasure it would be
Again, to think

Caught up in a playful dare
Trapped against a thick brick wall
By things
Very, very, VERY tall

Mind dissolved
I'm one of them
Yes, this is the price; the sentence
This how I am condemned

No individuality
A dark future
Sadly
Is what I forsee

Caught in a web
A sticky web of lies
They laugh at me behind my back
That, they can't disguise

Traitor
Is the sole word
That I would use to describe them
As long as it was not heard

And though I am bottled up
I adventure back to, from time to time
Yes, I visit
The coral caves of my mind

Author's Note

This was musing, just writing down obscure things that popped up, that way you can see what REAALLY goes through my head. :) Mwhahahahahahahaah!!!!! Or something.

Reviews

[Dark Rider]

Although, I am not the best person to critic poems, this was really great! I liked it. :)

[Riley Bray]

I really enjoyed this poem! It made me think and it was very interesting and different...A good write!

[Chloe]

Glad you liked and took the time to come by!

[Just Kim]

The last 3 stanzas sold me the write, so much truth.
I enjoyed this alot!!!