Stars

about a girl who spend her days wishing upon stars

stars.

I remembered only 2 nights.

Stars were spilling over the sky

I looked and stared

Trying to wonder,

both night,

the stars seemed to 

stand for my longing.

Away from what  i know,

those stars seemed to be the only thing

that remind me.

Stars, i wished upon you

countless of night.

Wishing you, willing you

to make it all come true.

Those days spent with tears.

starry sky seemed to be 

silver teardrops glittering.

The first i wished was for you

to let me see her again.
To say goodbye.

The next, was to bring me

back to the same place,

to be with my friends.

You grant me none,

heartless little things.

I see the sky 

bleak of anything.

No clouds, no stars, no sun, no rain.

If they all symbolize an emotion

my sky is void of them.

It's grey, no clouds, no daydreams

no stars, no longer tears

no sun, no more fiery cheery smile

no rain, no more singing and dancing.

Just by myself.

staring at the empty sky

wondering whether it would ever be filled 

Reviews

[Lixin]

"Heartless little things" I liked this :)

I like this, but again, you reveal a little too much. Maybe it's just my style. (Oh and i spotted some errors here and there. Always read through it again before sharing it with the world!)

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