Two Equals We

Uninhibited and unscriptied... Relax and enjoy - sink into a comfortable old chair and recall a time when life had a meaning as powerful as love... eternity - eternally - equivalent

Two Equals We

 

 

Living inside each other, we know what we feel.
Passions… majestic… creation, feels so surreal.
Soar to new heights, a beautiful Mountain View.
Every moment given to us, we discover something new.

Hand in hand embraces, deeply emotions grow.
No words left unspoken, each other WE do know.
We've been given the gift of one, an equivalent of two.
As once - a million times spoken, I am you.

Attempt to dust away, the residual effect.
Set aside the consequences, this now - we'll neglect.
Word searching warriors, we are spiritual no doubt.
Hand to heart, with these words we will never be without.

Climb that hill; we'll see the massive valley below.
Fate has brought us to this point, like ink on paper - flow.
We live in today, moving forward to forever.
Love; it grows of magnitude, until the 'twelfth of never'.

Author's Note

Did it take you there? One can only pray.

Reviews

[Natasha Ashway]

Almost... Maybe I was caught up absorbing the rythym of the words. I loved the first four lines, waited to feel the beat again and didn't, but was compensated with the flourishing brush stroke of the clever last one, '...until the twelfth of never.'
Nice work.

[Floating on the feather..]

Yeah I did take me there...And thanks for taking me there cos it has been long i havent been there.I wish i could stay there for ever.

A very passionate write. Love which is ever so growing and 'lovable'.

Excellent write.

[Dead Angel]

oh wow, very beautiful poem. it certainly took me to that serene place. but since i have a great guy in my life i'm always in that place. thanks for sharing. :)

[ELii]

Very beautiful. Definately too me there, but I think I know the place very well. thanks for sharing.

[Nicholas Hallows]

Yes, it took me there. You express the feelings of an ever-growing love perfectly in this poem. Very well penned. Your love definitely flowed from pen to paper on this one. NH

[mattavelli]

This is beautiful!
It gives me a great feeling of comfort.
Take care.

[Robert Luna]

Very passionate words and the imagery of such beauty be captured and placed on display for a world to witness and take in. Your words speak of a love that is so pure and right no one could deny the power of its union. A place where body meets soul. That level that words become meaningless the only language spoke is something that can't be heard but only felt.


Wonderfully Done!!!!!!