ONE

The One - YOU knew I was... the One - WE are...

One

 

ONE Love... This we have created - ONE.
Living in the moment, looking into the next...
We grow stronger in a faith that most do not
experience.
We keep our hands on this world - we own it.
Looking into the sky, those stars immense oblivious,
we are their keepers.
We are ONE, this Love above and beyond any previous.
Consider the source never forget... Life Partners.
Let the waves wash out - reach for the Mountain Tops...
Creating everything new... the future - we use the past.
My Love is an Eternal Fire... engulfed.
Embrace our fulfillment...
Carry me...
Fill me...
I am your mirror reflection.

 

Copyright ©2008  Candida Dawne Colson

 

Author's Note

I am intrigued... please do give me honesty.

Reviews

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Lovely, Candi.. a beautiful poem and nicely written.. I would love a love as this, we all would..
It also reminded me of U2 One.. one love but we're not the same we've got to carry each other, carry each other.. of course they are talking brotherly and sisterly love..
God poem.

Chloe
xoxo

[Bradley Shawn Mcquigg]

I really loike how you laid this out...really good work!

[Cameron Connolly]

i really liked it. emotion was extremely apparant. much enjoyed the read.

[Bradley Shawn Mcquigg]

that was a very beautiful poem...II loved it...front to back!!!!!!

[Troy Baham Jr.]

i think your description says it all. it's like i can see it growing as the poem goes on and at the end you truly are one being, or at least so akin to the other person that it is impossible to tell you apart

[Susan M. Fenn]

OMG.. I love this, I felt it in my soul, feel it in my heart, and cherish you for sharing it. Absolutely fantastic write hon. Sorry for the long delay on any other poems/stories. I am catching up my inbox.. (60 to go) talk soon.
xoxo

[Brandon]

baeutiful...the unity in diversity of our world...i loved this we are all one...the last line summed it up perfectly

"I am your mirror reflection"

love it

[Fades]

Reminds me of the song "We are one" by KISS and "A song for love" by Extreme. I love the way you bring nature into it :). Beautiful..

[Ryan Jaimz Knight]

Beautiful piece, in this case it reminded me of Bob Marley's 'One Love', and the way we must all unite and love one another. Thank you for sharing this piece, I enjoyed reading it.
BJH

[Ismael Rodriguez Jr.]

very creative way to describe love, it's kind of toaist in a way.

[penloverfool]

This is piece is full of passion and creativity.
Certainly remarkable!





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