ONE

The One - YOU knew I was... the One - WE are...

One

 

ONE Love... This we have created - ONE.
Living in the moment, looking into the next...
We grow stronger in a faith that most do not
experience.
We keep our hands on this world - we own it.
Looking into the sky, those stars immense oblivious,
we are their keepers.
We are ONE, this Love above and beyond any previous.
Consider the source never forget... Life Partners.
Let the waves wash out - reach for the Mountain Tops...
Creating everything new... the future - we use the past.
My Love is an Eternal Fire... engulfed.
Embrace our fulfillment...
Carry me...
Fill me...
I am your mirror reflection.

 

Copyright ©2008  Candida Dawne Colson

 

Author's Note

I am intrigued... please do give me honesty.

Reviews

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Lovely, Candi.. a beautiful poem and nicely written.. I would love a love as this, we all would..
It also reminded me of U2 One.. one love but we're not the same we've got to carry each other, carry each other.. of course they are talking brotherly and sisterly love..
God poem.

Chloe
xoxo

[poetsblade]

a few too many comparatives for my taste but beautiful words ;)

[Passion for Literature]

I am taken in by the amount of emotion you place into your words...the use of the word "we" gives this poem an ambiguous connotation which I find gives it sense of spiritedness...your words flow very nicely and the power of embracing LOVE with the elements of nature was very well done...BEAUTIFUL POEM!

[JC Fox]

I thought this was a beautifully written poem and I loved the meaning behind it

[Vincent Weathers]

"those stars immense oblivious,
we are their keepers." --This part stuck out for me.
I also like "Living in the moment, looking into the next..."

What is the relationship between oblivious and immense? I think that you mean here that the stars are oblivious to their keepers, I think that the comma sort of throws me off, considering that "oblivious we are their keepers" has a much stronger relationship there. Check that section.

Otherwise, its colorful with imagery. Its good.
--Good work.

[Shadow]

THIS PIECE IS SURE TO TOUCH ANYONE WHO HAS EVER BEEN IN OR IS CURRENTLY IN LOVE WITH SOMEONE WHO TRULY LOVES THEM BACK

[Brent Cato]

I like this a lot, it's deep but to the point of the writers heart.

[Andrew - Moon Fixer]

This is really beautiful. This tells me that we own it all. everything is our to controll and to enjoy. beauty at it's finest. Thank you so much for the visual.
Andrew

[Steffi]

"We keep our hands on this world - we own it.
Looking into the sky, those stars immense oblivious,
we are their keepers."

[Ron Reardon]

Honesty? I can sense love, lust, passion is this, that is not obvious. maybe just the sense of the reader as he or she reads, a subliminal idea? I like it.

[The Lovely Sound Of Cra..]

I can't tell you how comfortable I felt while reading this poem. It gives a sense of being where you belong. I also really liked the last line of the piece.
"I am your mirror reflection."
No strangers. Just the one you love and know best.
Great piece. I enjoyed it. =) Thanks for sharing.