PHILGLAND

combined Philippines and England. i wrote this for my British friend whom i've known when i was a kid.

We met when we were so young

you came back after years soo long

i'm sorry i'm not a poet or something

I just write poem when it's boring

 

you didn't recognize me

you said I have long hair I see

I was glad to see you

I hope you did too

 

I was looking on facebook for beth

but I saw thousands it took me to death

you said your name has tur key

and i'm glad I found it luckily

 

different stories we shared,

little time to play we spared

we were bored because of rain

so we played and didn't care of mud stain.

 

from Philippines to England you go

going home you say "no''

I hope you'd come back someday

and have more time to play

 

to Facebook I should say thank you

for sending this message from me to you

even though we are thousand miles apart,

you will always be in my heart. ♥

Reviews

[cynthiabuhainbaello]

Very tender and affectionate poem for a long lost friend. Perhaps you could do well to capitalize the "i" and use the capital "I" for better readability.

[candaceflynn]

thank you. i'd keep that in mind! :)

[AK]

Another great poem from you! It is awesome! The rhyming is great:)

[candaceflynn]

thank you. rhyming words is the only thing i know! haha

[AK]

All my poems at first were rhyming too, then there came a time when I couldn't make them rhyme anymore xD...

[candaceflynn]

well your poems are great even though they're not rhyming. i dont know what will happen to mine if they lose that. haha.

[AK]

Poems get better as you write more if them:) so don't fret it:P