If It Wasnt You

Why wont you talk to me.
Is there sometihng wrong I can't see.
I miss the things we used to laugh and talk about.
Is there sometihng you doubt?
We used to have so much fun.
Dream about hanging in the sun.
Like there would never be an end.
Why have we come down to this seriously twisted bend?
But now it seems Like you are avoiding me. Staying away from me.
This makes me sad.
Have I done something seriously bad?
"Cuz" I miss you.
Do you miss me Too?
 

Reviews

[TLK]

Nice, easy going rhyming scheme. I get the feeling that I think you want to convey, of missing someone (and being sore about it). It's labelled as a 'prose poem', though, and due to the line breaks it's not one.