Look Away

When someone ask are you okay?
You smile and say yeah,
hidding the invisable tears and sorrow,
but when thhey turn around and look away
you wish they would look deeper,
and see the tears that are now streaming down
your face and see the sorrow.
You beg yourself to stop crying,
and tell yourself,
your stronger than this so show it.
You wipe your face and stand strait,
and hold your head hight.
The next day when someone looks away,
you say I'm stronger than that,
and hold it all in.

Reviews

[Luna Azul]

Has a deeper meaning than the overlying one. Very good, except the few minor grammatical errors.