Life or death

Life or death

A Story by camel954
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Going from strangers that you only met through improper channels to picking words very carefully that decided life, death or improper misuse of actions. How did everything go so f*****g wrong but so f*****g right at the same time as they were both so close, literally fingertips apart but were so far apart physically lacking the proper channels. As i tell you life or death was at stake but trembling hands made it hard to conversate actions. Who could have ever seen this coming, even God didn't have a way out meaning he's alone again.
"oh f**k what have I caused this time,
HOW DID I NOT SEE THAT BEFORE,
I could have done so much more to help,
are you even listening?, wake up,
I could have stopped this and I didn't,
he was so careful that even I couldn't break him, 
it. was. all. my. fault. AGAIN,
i made him do it, 
you deserved this anyway, 
you did everything possibly wrong" - B
"you need to help him,
do you not see that its impossible to change what has been done?,
he's relying on you,
he's the only person you have,
don't let this be another dot being connected,"- H
The choice of words made into a sentence is when panic, responsibility and urgency concentrated the air so much that it was hard to breathe, his heart started to reach abnormal levels, his eyes suffocated with tears that made conversating actions that much harder. Uncontrollable psychotic thoughts of control and manipulative behaviour made matters better, as CONTROL was what was needed from an outside source completely invisible to the naked eye.  

Hahahahah its getting interesting right? well nothing beyond this point sense to the ordinary person, have i managed to catch you out? have i proved my point? have i expressed myself clearly?.......NO? well oh boy is there some reading to do now. Read carefully?

Everything that he said had to be worded perfectly from wise souls that had lost their place, life WAS at as much value to death but death seemed more promising of a goal through the visions and thoughts lurking behind him, to his surprise life was the chosen value after hours going by that felt like days of rain falling on his face with blood added to the mix.

Wow, something finally unexpected, god this was getting so boring 
As congealed blood started to form and take effect realisation started to take effect that it was HIS fault HE could have prevented it HE could have stopped it all from happening but something was IMMINENT and bound to happen at this time and that was?

SHUT UP, get to the f*****g point already like honestly 

Peace, between 2 supporting parties were finally established causing the protected asset to be healed and taken care of.

Words were spilt from me, words were used and consequently came all the way back around to the wrong person. I caused all of this and could have stopped it with one single phrase which is scary to admit but f**k it feels great. - H

The end

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© 2023 camel954


Author's Note

camel954
do you want a more aggressive or a calmer more breaking "narrator"?
pls ignore my terrible SPAG,ty

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Excellent writing. Enjoyed reading.

Posted 11 Months Ago


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camel954

11 Months Ago

Thank you, I always struggled in writing in general whilst I was in school so I'm glad someone likes.. read more

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Added on October 7, 2023
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