A Fall from Grace

I wrote this poem a few years ago and just recently found it again. I wrote it after a close friend died of a heroin overdose. I was a very inexperienced writer at the time.

A Fall from Grace

This poor soul’s childish cheer did not last

For in the end it led him to his fall

For what he conceived would be a blast

Sent him tumbling off the grace’s wall

But do not mock this poor soul’s fall from grace

For it was only by his choice that it was allowed

And as he skid broadside alongside tears, fears, and a shattered face

He alone let his dreams be tragically plowed

Author's Note

I wrote this when I was very young and having a hard time dealing with current events. It's not good but i just thought I would post it anyways.

Reviews

[disconnectedspirit]

i love you and goodnight, let us not end the night in a fight..I am angered by your lileth comments..but i would rather go to bed with good thoughts..i wont mention that site we are on

[disconnectedspirit]

that poem is not mutual love, so I know that is not me..anyhow it is getting late, I put one poem through LOL..

[disconnectedspirit]

but he also knows I control it, I would not send you dirty pictures, cam etc..he knows that would not happen..that is adultery..that is why i called the poem tempations, because i am tempted with a private blog..which is NO..that is a form of adultery, my fantasies are to remain inside..

[disconnectedspirit]

i think God is playing a joke on me, I tried to find a place you were not in, first one I got to and you are there..I have so many questions for God of why...I mean so much info and discernment with one person that I cherish, that I can not be with..and I have had insights plenty, dreams of susanne with that 14 year old girl, so Iknow he is not angered by my emotions

[disconnectedspirit]

i know that is not about me because on the soup site well..you are all excited by the postings,,,

[disconnectedspirit]

how often does one ask for a friend
and the other plays along just to be near the one they love

[disconnectedspirit]

it is you..i am reading your other material here LOL

[disconnectedspirit]

do you really feel that I torture you? that really killed to read..I give you prophecy instead..i cried to read that

[disconnectedspirit]

I CANT ESCAPE YOU lol